*peers at the pictures* Okay, first a disclaimer from a fat chick with fat parents, fat aunts and uncles, fat siblings, and one plump grandmother-- I dislike the Maxis fat morph for unusual reasons. To me, the chest, back, and belly look fine, but the arms and legs get skinny? wtf. Fat men very often have legs worth showing off, thanks Maxis, due to the workout you get from hauling the fat around and up and down stairs and whatnot. I shall point to Henry VIII as an example.
Onward to actual critique!
I actually think it looks okay, for the most part... I'm not sure what I think of the man-boobs-- I almost think you could skip them, since not every man develops them. You could try making the upper arms a little thicker, maybe, which might help the proportion, aaaaaaand... the thighs seem off to me, but I'm not sure how. Either they should be muscular-skinny all the way up, or the whole thigh should get heavier, not just the top. Most fat guys I know don't store their excess food energy in their hips and thighs unless they're fatter than your average fat morph, but perhaps in an androgynous body, that doesn't matter so much.
Basically, I think the gut looks fine, and if you want to tweak anything else, it should probably be non-gut-related areas.
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Date: 2010-03-02 12:15 am (UTC)Onward to actual critique!
I actually think it looks okay, for the most part... I'm not sure what I think of the man-boobs-- I almost think you could skip them, since not every man develops them. You could try making the upper arms a little thicker, maybe, which might help the proportion, aaaaaaand... the thighs seem off to me, but I'm not sure how. Either they should be muscular-skinny all the way up, or the whole thigh should get heavier, not just the top. Most fat guys I know don't store their excess food energy in their hips and thighs unless they're fatter than your average fat morph, but perhaps in an androgynous body, that doesn't matter so much.
Basically, I think the gut looks fine, and if you want to tweak anything else, it should probably be non-gut-related areas.